Same Experience.
Completely Different Resume.
Saharsh had 2 years of experience and zero callbacks. Brutus rewrote his resume for a Data Analyst role at Razorpay. Here's exactly what changed.
Candidate Profile
Saharsh Sharma
Targeted Role
Data Analyst at Razorpay
Experience Level
2 years
Before Brutus
0 callbacks in 3 months
Score: 2/10
After Brutus Rewrite
3 interview calls in 2 weeks
Score: 9/10
BEFORE — Saharsh Sharma's Weak Resume
AFTER — Brutus Rewrite
What Brutus Changed
Every line was optimized to pass ATS and impress the hiring manager.
Objective → Professional Summary
Vague "want to grow" replaced with a targeted value statement aimed directly at Razorpay.
"Responsible for" Deleted Everywhere
Every instance replaced with strong action verbs: Engineered, Designed, Conducted, Built, Automated.
Hobbies & Declaration Removed
Cricket and "I hereby declare" are resume space killers that signal inexperience to any recruiter.
Numbers Added Throughout
65% time saved, 500K rows, ₹4.2L saved, 18% retention — every claim is now quantified and verifiable.
Internship Expanded
Was 5 vague lines, now shows real contribution and initiative with specific outcomes.
Academic Projects Rewritten
From "made a project on Python" to full descriptions with tech stack, dataset size, and results.
Skills Section Restructured
Removed "Hard Working" and "Team Player" — replaced with categorized technical skills showing real depth.
GitHub & LinkedIn Added
Essential for any data or tech role, signals that work is verifiable and candidate is active.
Certifications Added
Shows continuous learning and initiative beyond the degree — exactly what Razorpay looks for.
CGPA & Coursework Added
Relevant for a recent graduate, adds academic credibility and shows relevant technical foundation.
Overall Impact
Brutus Score Before
2/10
Brutus Score After
9/10
ATS Compatibility: 34% 91%
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